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[Video] My first try

Posted: 08 Nov 2014, 14:34
by pohern
So I started trackmania2 a few days ago and i was quite inspired to do a trackmania video :D
This is also my first time doing video editing
Link http://youtu.be/_UmLrcgBuKA
i hope i can get some feedback and tips on how i should continue :thumbsup:

Re: [Video] My first try

Posted: 08 Nov 2014, 14:35
by novationx
pohern wrote:So I started trackmania2 a few days ago and i was quite inspired to do a trackmania video :D
This video isn't complete and i only had the afternoon to do a mere 30 seconds...
This is also my first time doing video editing
Link http://youtu.be/roDyXQroJho
i hope i can get some feedback and tips on how i should continue :thumbsup:
(note: i apologize for the super low quality video ><)
awesome bro! high action + music especially. Keep it up ^^

Re: [Video] My first try

Posted: 08 Nov 2014, 16:29
by Demented
Nice job.
Looks like you're enjoying the game.

Re: [Video] My first try

Posted: 09 Nov 2014, 11:16
by pohern
Demented wrote:Nice job.
Looks like you're enjoying the game.
novationx wrote:
awesome bro! high action + music especially. Keep it up ^^
Thanks for replying! :D

Managed to finish it today! :D
I am quite happy with the result even though the video is not perfect
Link: http://youtu.be/_UmLrcgBuKA
Feedback would be nice! :thumbsup:

Re: [Video] My first try

Posted: 09 Nov 2014, 17:00
by Demented
It's a good video pohern.
Some feedback...OK... I'd suggest maybe a few transition fades or at least at the beginning and end, and it feels like it needs an ending of some sort like crossing a finish line or a big crash or something. It felt a bit like you stopped editing before a planned ending. But that's just me being critical. All in all, you're off to a great start.

Re: [Video] My first try

Posted: 10 Nov 2014, 06:09
by pohern
Demented wrote:It's a good video pohern.
Some feedback...OK... I'd suggest maybe a few transition fades or at least at the beginning and end, and it feels like it needs an ending of some sort like crossing a finish line or a big crash or something. It felt a bit like you stopped editing before a planned ending. But that's just me being critical. All in all, you're off to a great start.
Thanks I appreciate the feedback! Will keep that in mind when I have the time again to do a new video :thumbsup:

Re: [Video] My first try

Posted: 10 Nov 2014, 07:02
by tcq
I like it, especially that last half of the video where you show some of this crashes everytime when the music goes faster. What I don't like is around 1:00-1:04 where the camera goes through a block. Else a really good first try.

Re: [Video] My first try

Posted: 17 Nov 2014, 08:51
by pohern
tcq wrote:I like it, especially that last half of the video where you show some of this crashes everytime when the music goes faster. What I don't like is around 1:00-1:04 where the camera goes through a block. Else a really good first try.
Thanks for your feedback!^^