My two first attempts at editing.

[MEdits]

Oi, so recently I've been playing around with the replay editor and some 3rd party softweres.
I've currently made two edits and need some help on how to improve at editing.
I'm very open for criticism.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wRXpdYeh3BE

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNjiN_R9XkM

[Rots]

Looks good, keep on working on the clips, add some effects or details like on the second short clip and you are in the good way

[MEdits]

Looks good, keep on working on the clips, add some effects or details like on the second short clip and you are in the good way

Thanks, I'll try to add some more details in some future edits and perhaps improve my cameras.
I can't really see any big improvements I can make, I guess I will continue editing and keep details in mind.

[Rots]

If it's just a replay edit to show a fast run, set the camera flow following the music rythm, with slowmo shots and such, that is commonly used by everyone. (pls note i'm not a videomaker, i'm just a spectator)

If the clip/video has a main theme, or is something else than a fast lap, take great shots, great camera angles, some music, colors, effects and you are done